Universities and colleges are the place where students spend most crucial part of their life exploring on their interests, ideas, talents, goals, friends, etc. Education along with sports and social activities contributes to the holistic development of an individual. So, it is equally important to allocate financial support for sports and social activities.
Education plays a key role in an individual's early stage of life to succeed in his future career. But, education alone does not contribute to a successful career. A student gets to know his capabilities and places himself in the right path only when he tries to explore and perform things that are eccentric and not prevalent. One of the best examples would be the world famous cricketer Sachin Tendulkar who did not excel in his studies, but definitely had a successful sports career. By this, I would say that, if a student is very keen about his interest and chooses sports as his career, one can mend himself to be a better and successful athlete.
In addition, playing Sports is beneficial as it helps to sharpen the mindset, improves reactive response, that in-turn adds on to better performance in the academics. Lots of personal, social and health benefits are gained through sports activities. Also it is an escape from peer pressure and a stress buster. Perhaps, not surprisingly, people who play sports are more active than others.
Admittedly, it is conspicuous that spending money on education benefits by giving better knowledge to the students. In light to this, I would also like to add on the fact that involving in social activities contributes to an individual's personal development. It helps to improve their communication skills, eye contact, ability to listen and be confident.
Finally, I conclude that sports and social activities abreast with education are important for a student in the University.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 31, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an individual' or simply 'individuals'?
Suggestion: an individual; individuals
...ities. Education plays a key role in an individuals early stage of life to succeed in his f...
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Line 5, column 251, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...s are gained through sports activities. Also it is an escape from peer pressure and ...
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Line 7, column 223, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an individual' or simply 'individuals'?
Suggestion: an individual; individuals
...ing in social activities contributes to an individuals personal development. It helps to impro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 306.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2091503268 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89527729452 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571895424837 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5288841193 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.625 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4375 5.45110844103 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125770212164 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480249570667 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636909395076 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0905372508027 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065099322927 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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