A glance at how people react to others' errors brings to light a question that has several times provoked debate, that is, if a teacher or a meeting leader has made a mistake, whether people should point it out right away, or to talk to them independently, or even ignore it. Some that contend that it is better to correct the mistake as quickly as possible, avoiding others from being misguided. However, if I were in the classroom or the meeting, I would choose to talk to the teacher or the meeting leader after others are not present.
First and foremost, discussing the mistake after classes or meeting offer me more time to explain my opinion. Classes and meetings are usually tightly scheduled, and interrupting and talking about something unexpected in prior can be a waste of time. Even if I have the time to state the error, I will hardly have time to explain it in detail, nor would the one who made the mistake have sufficient time to analyze the reason of making that mistake. This is definitely not suitable for solving that problem. On the other hand, if I talk to the teacher or the meeting leader afterwards, we can have a deeper discussion and hopefully prevent similar mistakes in the future.
Secondly, it is undeniable that no one is able to make no mistake in his or her life, thus people are supposed to tolerate each other. Understandably, being proved wrong in front of a group of people can be embarrassing. But this does not mean that we could ignore and do nothing to mistakes made by others. In fact, if I talk to the one who made the mistake independently, not only can they realize the mistake they made, but they can also feel respected.
Admittedly, there are some justifications by those who argue that pointing out the error right away is expected. For instance, by doing so, the listeners will have the chance to know that error, otherwise, they may get confused. Nonetheless, I still affirm that the teacher or the meeting leader can correct that mistake in the next class or the next meeting, and they can also take several minutes demonstrating what has led them to the wrong conclusion. Only in this way can others understand the causes of the mistake, instead of merely knowing the outcome of the mistake.
Due to aforementioned ground, I would choose to talk about it later when the teacher or the meeting leader says something incorrect, and enough time to elucidate the mistake and show respect to others are two prime and conspicuous reasons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, still, thus, for instance, in fact, talking about, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2061.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 438.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70547945205 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.641864274 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481735159817 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 656.1 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.7517510362 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.235294118 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7647058824 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.05882352941 5.45110844103 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.85842293907 337% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184546577606 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621511630447 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484876748439 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113717262668 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374115533903 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 10.002688172 170% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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