Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.
I disagree with the statement above. I don’t think that we can benefit more from traveling domestically than from traveling to foreign countries. I believe that traveling outside of one’s country has a lot more to offer. My opinion is thus based on the following reasons.
First of all, traveling to foreign countries can benefit us in terms learning more about different cultures. One who has traveled to many countries can get familiar with as many cultures. For example, one of my professors at university has been to a big number of countries. He says that while being in multiple places, he got to know more about the differences those cultures have. I think most of the experiences he has shared with us during his lectures were drawn from his numerous experiences while traveling to different countries.
Secondly, traveling to other countries can be helpful in terms of learning another language. It may allow more exposure to the spoken language that one may be learning. For example, in my freshman year at university, I was actively involved in learning Turkish. And in the year following, when I got to travel to Turkey for some time, I was lucky to be able to practice Turkish in the real setting. Upon arrival back, I was more fluent in that language. Therefore, I believe that traveling to another country may have an important benefit in one’s linguistic purposes.
Finally, traveling to other countries may mean new relationships. It is not uncommon to make new friendships while having a trip to a foreign country. My traveling experience in Turkey is an example. Back then, while in Turkey, I was able to meet new people who I still keep in touch with. Some of those people have even visited my country, too and I think this is a good indication that traveling made us friends.
To sum, I believe that people can benefit a lot more from traveling to foreign countries than traveling in their own country for the reasons above. Although this view may not be shared by many people, I feel consistent in holding this opinion.
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- TPO 30 Integrated 88
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 152, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, thus, while, for example, i feel, i think, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 13.8261648746 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1716.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 353.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8611898017 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77332046587 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478753541076 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.0 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.085492617 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0454545455 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400658633157 0.236089414692 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118971715543 0.076458572812 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123862027553 0.0737576698707 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261588652076 0.150856017488 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131876857975 0.0645574589148 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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