Essay topics: IELTS General Writing - Writing Task I
You have a new job and can no longer attend your regular English class.
Write a letter to the English school. In your letter:
- describe the situation
- explain the problem
- say what you would like to happen now that you cannot attend the lesson.
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Director,
St. Trinity School of English Language
Dublin
My name is John Smith and I am a student of English language in department of foreign languages in your school. I have been learning English with you for the past several months. However, at this point, I can no longer continue the course because of my new employment.
I would like to inform you further that I have been accepted as a trainee software analyst by Intel Company and will be joining it by the end of next week. I need to work in my employer’s head office located in London. This is a reason why, I will soon move from Dublin to London.
Pursuant to these developments, I request you to grant me permission to attend the remaining classes in your school based in London. I hope you will agree to such arrangements.
I sincerely thank you for all the assistance extended by you and your school in the past. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Sincerely,
John Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 91, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ded by you and your school in the past. I look forward to hearing from you soon. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 807.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66473988439 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66994463682 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618497109827 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6036567926 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.3636363636 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7272727273 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.54545454545 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222497204519 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747480801975 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482723918168 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119562806878 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424172485693 0.0580467560999 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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