Future of society will be made by taking an important decision now. No matter where we are or what we do, escaping from our responsibility can not make a future in society. Some people believe that it is not important to be responsible to future for young people while others disagree. In my view, i think that today the young people have no impact on the essential decision that determine the future of society due to some reasons.
First, todays there are many differences between fathers and child in their point of view. the young people have altered during long time due to some reasons. According to a research in MIT university, sixtyfold of young people have no any willing in their life. they do not have sense of responsibility about future. for instance , the traditional generation in many society , they were working hard and were attempting to have impact on future decision. thus the change in point of view is more clear that that past.
Second, the governments have a vast portion in youth discouraging. in many societies young people are more knowledgeable and every body knows much information about his rights. this increasing information can lead to discouraging for young people. when a youth senses that the government do not tell him truth and the his willing does not satisfy, he will be inactive to have influence on the future of his society. for example, when unemployed people are increased in society, the young people do have any eagerness to have impact on future, because his contemporary is in danger and unconsciously select to do not paly role in making a good decision for future of society. therefore, the governments have influence on youth discouraging.
finally, many societies have altered by the advent of technology and being exposed to the new media. Many young people spend much time on the internet and connect with other in all over the world. sometimes they find a new media or new though and follow it without any consideration. New media can promote or changes our point of view. various categories of information is on the internet. some of it may have adversely impact on young people and may encourage the to have no influence in your future of society.
in result, by the change of society and by arrival of technology blossom century, the points of view have altered . todays many young people live without any especial life style and do not follow the traditional views.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, may, second, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, i think, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2026.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88192771084 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71144994546 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455421686747 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 657.0 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.8325394911 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4166666667 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2916666667 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45833333333 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.5376344086 451% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309136726529 0.236089414692 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917137139164 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678565200913 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190962554983 0.150856017488 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483893634077 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.