what advantage and disadvantage of watching TV
TV is the part of essential in the modern life .There are many benefits as well as having more drawbacks for each person.I find myself in complete agreement with regard to this problem
The reason for this trend may involve the recognition that watching TV helps our life to become more and more meaningful and have chance of broading our knowledge.It is clear that if people follow to kind of programusually.we will learn meaningful lesson from this. Moreover ,After these day studying hard , children enjoy hour of enjoyment which immense themselves in a different world and escape from real world. For example, I often learn vocabulary in context which is helpful in learning English.
Besides, there is a handful of advantages which is bad effect for most of people.They are possible spend too much time on watching Tv everyday. Most of them are attracted by funny program . Especially children, who can watch TV days and nights do not eat and drink , it increases stress levels and affect mental health and physical health.
In the future I hope people wil recognize advantage and disadvantage about waching Tv so that they can be flexible time in their life and spend time on taking part in social activity. It certainly helps them to become a good citizen in city.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, may, moreover, so, well, for example, kind of, as well as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1058.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 216.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89814814815 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65157265703 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.675925925926 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 119.898329325 49.4020404114 243% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 132.25 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200604200258 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702259105274 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767663624493 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112147902367 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630895037995 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 9.78957915832 271% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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