In the modern world, people prefer migrating or studying abroad for various reasons.Study abroad can contribute additional opportunities and moving to an area that there have political and economic stability can indicate as a main pros. However, homesickness and discrimination are the negative factors of this.
Firstly, there is no doubt that developed countries have been providing high quality of study, Youths,especially from developing countries find it attractive to study there.It is undeniable that, it can maintenance their skills of knowledge and experience which might great aid for improving their government in the future.
Moreover,economic and political instability obliged people to leave their countries.It also additional advantage for people to migrate somewhere to live in peace and under better economic conditions. Likewise, some developed countries suffer from demograpig disbalance, so gaining new citizens can ahead solve this problem.
Turning to the other side of the argument ,there are some challenges people can face in abroad.It is clear cut that, adopting new condition is not plain sailing,even people sometimes commence to new life from scratch. It can cause some problems as well as homesickness and culture shock which needed to deal with.
Another issue is that, people can meet some discrimination which additional stress factor to hinder them to improve.For example, if you are in a foreign country and you don’t have language proficiency to contact with them can exacerbate your situation to adopt new life. For it, before the rush into making any decision about abroad, people should be ready for any situation.
To sum up ,although it is so appealing for people to study and live abroad,there are some pros and cons.Foremost advantage of this is that, opportunity of gaining modern knowledge and living under better conditions,while meeting culture shock and discrimination are the drawbacks which can overtake by time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, likewise, moreover, so, well, while, for example, no doubt, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57475083056 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.140724695 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594684385382 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.8374086893 49.4020404114 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 167.8 106.682146367 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 53.0 5.01903807615 1056% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270565146881 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107960765218 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426056629829 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144998204455 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313380517691 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.9 13.0946893788 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.11 50.2224549098 48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.4 11.3001002004 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.62 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.78957915832 169% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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