The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.
The graph compares the number of men and women’s spare time based on their employment levels in a typical of the week in hour in 1998-99. Overall, unemployed and retired people have more free time than other groups.
To begin with, the highest amount of free time was enjoyed by out of work men which peak almost at 85 hours over the period of 1998 to 1999, while female had significantly less than 80. Also, retired men spent leisure time more than 80 hours which is higher by around 3 than women.
Furthermore, men in working took delight about 45 hours of time off, whereas the woman of this category had less 40 hours. No data are given for male in part-time staff and housewives. Additionally, Female who had a side job and got married gave 40 and 50 hours to relaxing. To sum up, people who are out of the work have more spare time that enjoyable
- Some high schools require all students to wear school uniforms. Other high schools permit students to decide what to wear to school. Which of these two school policies do you think is better? 61
- The illustration below show how coffee is sometimes produced. 61
- The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words 91
- Computers games are extremely popular with children nowadays.What are the negative impact of these children playing computer games, and what can be done to minimize the bad effects 61
- Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or working a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. 79
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, whereas, while, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 706.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46835443038 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34713720016 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639240506329 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 213.3 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.5843232414 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.25 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 5.23603664747 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210915626222 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903706571139 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551546625838 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146517847346 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354190682878 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.2329268293 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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