Some people enjoy change, and they look forward to new experiences. Others like their lives to stay the same, and they do not change their usual habits. Compare these two approaches to life. Which approach do you prefer? Explain why.
Some people prefer to try new activities and thing in their lives. Other people, however, like to keep there lives in routine.In my opinion, it is better pass through new experience and things that you have never tried before. I fell this way for several reasons which I will explore in this article.
To begin with, trying new activities will keep your life in continuous change and will break the life routine, which is good for your mood and relaxation. I had read an article that states that many people suffer from depressing because of the daily routine. In addition, that will not break the mundane in the person life but also he will earn more experience about things and activities which were ambiguous to him. My experience is good example of this. When I was ten years old my life was so boring, and everyday the same as the day before it. I suffered from frustration. Doctors told me that I have to experience new things to enjoy myself and recover. I decided to learn swimming and after around two weeks, my feelings was different and I started enjoying the life. For that, I think that people should try new stuffs.
Secondly, if a person undergoes new experiences he will learn about new chances and opportunities. Moreover, he may find a new skills or ability that he is really good at it but he has never tried it before. Let me demonstrate this idea by an example. Consider a person who has a knack of drawing but he has never drawn a paint before. If he decided not try painting he will never find this skill. For instance, when I was watching soccer players I was saying myself I will never be like them. But after I played football for the first time I realized that I have the natural ability of playing with the ball. Because of that I believe that by trying new things you find out what you are good at it.
In conclusion, I believe that people should experience new activities through their lives. This is because that will help them to relax and break the routine. hence, they will not suffer from frustration. As well as that will let them know what skills and abilities they have.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2021-09-13 | Sanaullah97 | 76 | view |
| 2020-12-29 | Akshatagh | 80 | view |
| 2019-07-29 | Aurako | 75 | view |
| 2017-03-20 | Ahmad Alquraan | 62 | view |
| 2016-08-11 | sadra1988 | 40 | view |
- Films can tell us a lot about the country where they were made. What have you learned about a country from watching its movies? Use specific examples and details to support your answer. 66
- Films can tell us a lot about the country where they were made. What have you learned about a country from watching its movies? Use specific examples and details to support your answer. 73
- What do you want most in a friend—someone who is intelligent, someonewho has a sense of humor, or someone who is reliable? Which one of thesecharacteristics is most important to you? Use reasons and specific examplesto explain your choice. 61
- technology has made children less creative than they were in the past? 66
- Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinio 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 127, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...er, like to keep there lives in routine.In my opinion, it is better pass through n...
^^
Line 3, column 510, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...en years old my life was so boring, and everyday the same as the day before it. I suffer...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 680, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to swim'.
Suggestion: to swim
... myself and recover. I decided to learn swimming and after around two weeks, my feelings...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'skill'?
Suggestion: skill
...ortunities. Moreover, he may find a new skills or ability that he is really good at it...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 337, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... but he has never drawn a paint before. If he decided not try painting he will nev...
^^
Line 5, column 611, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...tural ability of playing with the ball. Because of that I believe that by trying new th...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 160, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hence
...lp them to relax and break the routine. hence, they will not suffer from frustration...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 166, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...m to relax and break the routine. hence, they will not suffer from frustration. A...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with, as well as that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 71.0 43.0788530466 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 383.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53002610966 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39655395945 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477806788512 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 527.4 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2857137837 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.2916666667 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9583333333 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.20833333333 5.45110844103 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139819795813 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442199589004 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455432081122 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103661513799 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418455670365 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 11.7677419355 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.52 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.