Some high schools require all students to wear school uniforms. Other high schools permit students to decide what to wear to school. Which of these two school policies do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
In modern society, the school uniform is a significant symbol that could represent the school for people. Some high schools allow students wearing casual to study which they can dress in their own style. In my opinion, there are two reasons that students should attire school uniform in terms of representation and equality.
First and foremost, wearing the uniform could represent the school which standardize
For instance, being a student in a reputable school would be an honor. The institute where hard to enter and famous, several students work hard to get into the reputation school. My own personal experience is a compelling example of this, I desired to study at the popular university where is somewhat difficult to get in, I hardly attempted to study in order to get in the famous university, as a result, I got into the university. I was proud of myself and I was wearing the uniform to let everyone know where did I study. This can represent the place where I study. Thus, wearing the uniform would be an honor and reminds them that they are wearing the school uniform, they should realize before acting.
Secondly, the school uniform is standard attire which determines equality in society. To be specific, some students could not afford to purchase new clothes or costly price, on the other hand, some can spend a lot of money to buy clothes which high price and high quality to wear to school. These directly impact students by separating the groups, also some students who wore the old outfit might be bullied from classy students. For instance, my nephew has studied at an international school which is surrounded plenty of wealthy students, my nephew’s family is not rich person, they could not afford high-cost attire. Fortunately, this school ordered all students wearing the uniform to study in order to avoid inequality and bullied issues. Hence, wearing the uniform could be able to equalize in the association.
In conclusion, it can be seen clearly that the uniform is a school’s identity which could represent also be an honor to wear. Furthermore, wearing a school uniform would be able to support student equality in society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1807.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 363.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97796143251 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63095928135 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493112947658 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 558.9 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4262797416 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.294117647 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3529411765 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.17647058824 5.45110844103 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.436359881415 0.236089414692 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172179990667 0.076458572812 225% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0968879901488 0.0737576698707 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.304571853369 0.150856017488 202% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0915931199733 0.0645574589148 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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