The threat of nuclear weapons maintains the world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far out-weight the disadvantages.
Nuclear is modern science in the development countries. So we believe that nuclear can be used as alternative clean source instead of fossil fuel which it is used by human around constantly. In contrast, other countries can use it in creating advanced weapons, which it leads to threaten other countries by destroying human-kind and plants while using it. In the following essay, i will discuss that nuclear outweigh positive sides than its negatives.
First of all, it can be used as alternative resources which human can depend on it instead of wasting and burning fossil fuel and coal. As a consequence, fossil fuels will increase air pollution as well as global warming will be developed gradually. When human go through nuclear energy by using it to function cars, which it can work on electricity will help to diminish from polluted air and global warming as well. Hence, nuclear energy is much better to enviromen than consuming non renewable resources. It is interesting to note, this renewable energies are cheaper. To illustrate more, there is a study in USA authorities show that they are working currently on dereasing taxes on renewable resources, so people can convert to this energy than non renewable powers.
On the contrary, nuclear is one of the methods can put the world on risks. If there is sny single mistake, it may happen in functioning it. It may destroy the lands. For example, Hiroshima and nagasaki had affected plants and humankind. So far, it is still being a reason in poisoning human genetics and plants at the sane time due to radiation which it comes out from the effected parts. notably, it had been killed thousands of people with severe of explosion nuclear radiation moreover, plants have never been grown so far. In addition, it is undeniable, that dominant countries can dominate weaker countries to occupy them, as they are ready to exploit it as advantage to kill people and dominate their conutry. The misuse of it will create destruction instead of getting benefits of it undoubtedly.
In berief, we believe nuclear's advantages can outweigh its negative sides. As if it is used in proper way. Although, it can create risks to countries, but it create a kind of peace between populations and its habitants alike. As a result, peace will spread around world.
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Hello team,
Hello team,
Can you explainnto me, what does it mean my essay readibilty is low?!
I think, it means, no one can understand it while reading it, right?'
Thanks,
Hussein
No, you got the wrong idea.
No, you got the wrong idea. it doesn't mean 'no one can understand it while reading it'.
correct meaning:
The lower of the index, the easier for people to read.
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from this page:
http://www.testbig.com/forum/automated-readability-index
'Automated_readability_index is low' means:
1. the sentences could be too short.
2. the words could be too simple, for example, if there are a lot of words with 2-3 letters, it will keep the index low, like: it, can, he, she, my, is, are...
what to do:
1. develop complex/compound sentences which will make the length of sentences longer
2. improve vocabulary words, use words somehow difficult, not too simple
Dear Test big team,
Dear Test big team,
Good day
Thank you so much for your reply, it was really appreciated.
And thanks once again for your clarification.
Regards,
Hussein
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 381, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...while using it. In the following essay, i will discuss that nuclear outweigh posi...
^
Line 6, column 390, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Notably
...h it comes out from the effected parts. notably, it had been killed thousands of people...
^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 76, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ntages can outweigh its negative sides. As if it is used in proper way. Although, ...
^^
Line 8, column 159, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'creates'?
Suggestion: creates
...t can create risks to countries, but it create a kind of peace between populations and...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, may, moreover, so, still, well, while, for example, in addition, in contrast, kind of, as a result, as well as, first of all, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1926.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97674418605 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7040180051 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53488372093 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.3058635643 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5454545455 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5909090909 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140075919815 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476873037509 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559622587413 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0922455324697 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311786250038 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.