The chart below shows the sales of music albums in Spain between 1980 and 2010.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph depicts sales data for five different genres of music between 1980 and 2010. Data is given for pop, rock, classic, R&B, and ballads, and sales are measured in millions of units sold.
The most notable characteristic of the data recorded in 1980 is the fact that classic, R&B, and pop are three least popular genre; each of these genres sold fewer than half a million records. In the same year, rock and ballad sales were roughly three and two times higher than the other competing genres, respectly. However, between 1980 and 1990, their lead in sales diminished.
After that, there are many noticible changes. Firstly, the overall amount of sales increased dramatically starting in 1995. Up until this point no single genre had sold more than 1.5 million copies in a year. However, by the end of the period, the top two selling genres alone totaled approximately 5 million sales. This figure comprised of ballads, which is the only genre to sell more than 2.5 million records in a single year. Despite the laege sales increases of most genres, sales of rock music had drastically declined by end of the period.
Overall, it is seem that music sales generally increased.
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Essay evaluation report
Overall, it is seem that music sales generally increased.
Overall, it seems that music sales generally increased.
Sentence: In the same year, rock and ballad sales were roughly three and two times higher than the other competing genres, respectly.
Error: respectly Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: After that, there are many noticible changes.
Error: noticible Suggestion: noticeable
Sentence: Despite the laege sales increases of most genres, sales of rock music had drastically declined by end of the period.
Error: laege Suggestion: large
flaws:
no serious flaws found. It is a great essay.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 3 2
No. of Sentences: 12 10
No. of Words: 205 200
No. of Characters: 947 1000
No. of Different Words: 115 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.784 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.62 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.302 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 58 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 44 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 19 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 14 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.083 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.216 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.25 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.38 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.585 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.065 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 125, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'genre' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'genres'.
Suggestion: genres
...c, R&B, and pop are three least popular genre; each of these genres sold fewer than h...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 16, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'seemed'.
Suggestion: seemed
...by end of the period. Overall, it is seem that music sales generally increased.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 992.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88669950739 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35826344772 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5960591133 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.895027518 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6666666667 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9166666667 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.58333333333 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122173308358 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543643337401 0.103423049105 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594539410629 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932951505626 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336654801604 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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