Dear Omid,
I hope this letter find you and your family well. I am writing this with regard to my movement to new house.
As you know I am working in a car factory as an accountant in the suburb of the city. Accordingly, I had a lot of trouble regarding getting to work on time every morning in the light of the fact traffic congestion is extremely breathtaking. Hence, I decided to move to a new house which is not far from my workplace.
Beside the advantage of the closeness to my work, this new house has a lot of other positive point for me. Fortunately, my house benefit of a really outstanding view of the park that is located exactly opposite side of my house. Not only do I have a big yard with a pool, but this house also is a new-built one and all the equipment are luxury.
I appreciate if you and your family come over here for lunch next holiday. Don’t forget to bring your children since they will inevitably have a wonderful day playing at the yard. I hope to see you all soon.
I am looking forward to hear from you as soon as possible.
yours sincerely,
Milad
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...e you all soon. I am looking forward to hear from you as soon as possible. yours ...
^^^^^^^
Line 12, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
...o hear from you as soon as possible. yours sincerely, Milad
^^^^^
Line 14, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s possible. yours sincerely, Milad
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, hence, if, look, really, regarding, so, well, you know, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 899.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.3640776699 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55452834078 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616504854369 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1692274973 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.1538461538 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8461538462 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 4.34317383033 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223287753042 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077654165356 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454608879941 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115498088209 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605710761631 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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