Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It's better to spend money enjoying life like going on vacation than to save money for the future.
Money management can be a very important lesson to everyone. Different people hold different opinions about spending their money. Some people prefer to have a “carpe diem” mentality, it while others believe that it is better to save it for future use. I agree with the former one.
First, spending money currently brings good life quality. Nowadays, it is necessary for us to release our pressure so that we won't suffer from serious physical or mental health problems. To accomplish that, we pay on what we love, even small and trivial, to bring sort of indirect joy to life. For example, going on vacation enables us to breathe the fresh air and view the beautiful sceneries, keeping us from concentrating on troubles in the reality. Buying a beautiful dress enlightens us so that we won't feel sad about the difficulties we meet.It is more meaningful to have a happy life than a rich one.
Second, spending money presently leads to self-improvement and makes more money. It is because people invest their money wisely on enhancing themselves, which helps them be more competitive in the job market or have more channels to earn money. For example, by joining in a yoga club or buying expensive makeup, people can promote their outer appearance so that they can leave a good first impression or have more chances to be appreciated by their leaders. It will result in job advancement and growing social network. Similarly, When going back to vacation, people can share their travel experience on the website or even publish a book about their trips. People are also able to become a dance coach after dancing for relax for years. Spending money on our hobbies can enrich our experience and boost our overall abilities, resulting in more job choices and several revenue channels.
Admittedly, some people may claim that saving money can encounter with the potential risks in the future. Specifically, some people worry about the large expenses on education. However, if we have a second thought, we will realize that money is not the primary thing children want. They want their parents to spend money to go on vacation together, which can also broaden children's horizons and let them experience different cultures. They hope their parents to accompany them to play sports together, which guarantee their strong body. They wish their parents to have a lot of unique stories to tell about their spare time, such as going hiking or doing the hand-draft, which is also a good way to foster their interests in certain areas. In this way, children will have a happier life and become an interesting person.
The reason we earn money is because we need to spend it. Instead of saving money for potential future risks, it is more advisable to spend the money at present.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...their money. Some people prefer to have a 'carpe diem' mentality, it wh...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ture use. I agree with the former one. First, spending money currently brings g...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...feel sad about the difficulties we meet.It is more meaningful to have a happy life...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to have a happy life than a rich one. Second, spending money presently leads t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... choices and several revenue channels. Admittedly, some people may claim that s...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...her, which guarantee their strong body. They wish their parents to have a lot of uni...
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Message: Probably an incorrect phrase. Use 'the reason 'is that''.
Suggestion: is that
...ing person. The reason we earn money is because we need to spend it. Instead of saving ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, second, similarly, so, while, for example, sort of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2321.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 472.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91737288136 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6610686524 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59178587638 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529661016949 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 718.2 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3223488178 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.84 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.88 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259750773934 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080794389072 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635081858038 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168288987483 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051722860504 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 86.8835125448 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.