Human have made a great technological process in the last hundred years. However, this progress have negative effects on people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent centuries, humankind have made various technological advancements, leading to an argument that this trend would impact adversely on ordinary people's lives. In my opnion, I strongly agree with this point of view.
Many opponents would reject this perspective seeing that the state-of-the-art technologies have facilitated human's life than ever such as keeping people abreast of up-to-the-minute information or getting a hold of friends who are studying overseas. However, I would argue that this is no longer the case due to the fact that residents are now being bombarded with diversified information, which is seldom perceived whether the resources of this is accurate or misleading. Advanced techologies also undermine intimate relations among people, which is the sentimental value in the past, where technology was a relatively new concept with people. The prime example of this is that more and more people, especially younger generation, have been utilized excessively their technical gadgets like laptops or smartphones rather than appreciating affectionate moments with family and friends.
Another adverse influence of the advent of high technologies would be overall health deterioration. It is true that many adults, particularly IT staff, are sufferring from recurrent symptoms such as eyestrain, backache and so on due to routine habit of keeping their eyes glued to the screens. It is also the case with a vast majority of people in the present day to lead a sendentary lives, which is a precursor to severely chronic diseases like obesity or diabetes. Consequently, the more advanced technology is, the less healthy human beings stay.
In conclusion, I utterly advocate with those who maintain that technological breakthroughs bring numerous detrimental effects on ordinary people's daily lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 146, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'staffs'?
Suggestion: staffs
... true that many adults, particularly IT staff, are sufferring from recurrent symptoms...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, so, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60288808664 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14984794087 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646209386282 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.3276179507 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.090909091 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1818181818 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195019198193 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716087553296 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509180324863 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125436368505 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495785259618 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.52 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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