The line chart gives information about the change in the percentage of population aged 65 and over in three different countries: Japan, Sweden and the USA during a 100-year period.
It is clear that the number in all three countries has an increased trend. While the proportion in Sweden and the USA shows a steadily rise during a century, Japan has a dramatic jump in the end of the period.
In 1940, the proportion of the population aged 65 and over in the USA was the largest (9%), while the percentage in Sweden and Japan were about 7% and 5% respectively. In the year 1960, the percentage in the USA and Sweden had a gradual rise, whereas the proportion in Japan bottomed out approximately 3%.
By 2040, the percentage of people aged 65 and over in Japan will peak at about 27% which is the largest among three countries. Meanwhile, the number in Sweden will be approximately 25% which is 2% more than that in the USA.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and the USA during a 100-year period. It is clear that the number in all three...
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Line 3, column 125, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('steadily') instead an adjective, or a noun ('rise') instead of another adjective.
... proportion in Sweden and the USA shows a steadily rise during a century, Japan has a dramatic ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 767.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59281437126 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66238885011 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48502994012 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 231.3 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0114026498 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.571428571 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277911423839 0.215688989381 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13190834737 0.103423049105 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106730812659 0.0843802449381 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175966071724 0.15604864568 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587324091091 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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