travel inside or outside of a country
Today, all people almost like to travel in worldwide and use the nature, mountain ranges, seas' beach and so forth. However, some of them travel in their own country and some go to a foreign country. I agree with this statement that it benefits for people to travel in the country that live.
First, paying less money for transportation. If they travel in their own country, they will have more options to use such as car, train and airplane, whereas they may cannot use car or even train to go to the another country. For instance, they can use car for movement from Theran, the capital of Iran, to Isfahan, a great historian city in Iran, then they do not have to pay much money for airplane because it is cheaper.
In addition, spending less time to travel. Thus, Less distant among cities provide a good situation to travel in the own country rather than a foreign country, so people can save time and use for more enjoy in the ultimate city. They have more time in order to go shopping, go more historian places, visit more enjoyable places. There is a Persian proverb that says " Save time, enjoy more,". According to this proverb, people can enjoy more, if they save the time.
Finally, familiar more with their own country cultures and people. In my country, Iran, there are a variety culture, people races and other things. People also are able to become familiar more with their past history, the famous artists and the early life style of the people that have lived there by traveling to the country sides. Although they may achieve some special experience by going to a foreign country, these experience will never be as valuable as travel in the own country.
In summary, people will receive more benefit by travelling to their own countrywide. They pay less money, save more time to visit specific places and familiarize more with the own country culture, people and so forth. Who can ignore these special benefits by traveling in the interior of country instead of going abroad?
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 197, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'going', 'gonna'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'train' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: going; gonna
...s they may cannot use car or even train to go to the another country. For instance, t...
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Line 5, column 395, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
...b that says ' Save time, enjoy more,'. According to this proverb, people can...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, may, so, then, thus, whereas, for instance, in addition, in summary, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 350.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76285714286 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32247053539 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474285714286 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 525.6 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5906623657 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6111111111 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4444444444 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159170998473 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073212182819 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648820405004 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122419564157 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696448234631 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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