work much
Work time have been important for anyone during the human history and thay have always wanted to manage the work with time. Thus, they usually like to do the duties exactly at the workday time not other times. They have some special reasons for this thought.
First, the workers want to spend their non-worktime with who are loved such as husband or wife, children and parents. The employees must maintain worktime for the workers correctly because they are human as well and have family that should pay attention to them, for example sometimes a member of family is illness and he or she needs to go to the doctor. Therefore, if the workers do not be there to help their family member, they will lose the focus during the work. The Phsycological researches show that people require an especial free-mental when they are working, otherwise they will not do the responsibilities correctly.
In addition, they work as value as they recieve payment. We never work more than our salary and it is a common situation that the workers are more satisfied during these times. Thus, at this time, they do any tasks that employees establish for them and also they are going to apply their whole trying to do them at the highest quality. For instance, my father is a worker that works in a big company and ,relating to the company instruction, they should work 8 hours per a day and 5 days in a week. Therefore, a day, his employer was asked him to stay in the company and work for 2 hours more without any more payment. Then, my father had to stay there but the output of his works was anything because my father did not have any enthusiastic to do that task.
In summary, although the employees ask their workers to work more, they will not do correctly, because they want to spend some time with their family and also they work as much as they recieve salary not more. Who can forget these special reasons and work more?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in summary, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58430232558 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35334984138 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497093023256 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 483.3 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5631894855 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.133333333 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9333333333 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22055338525 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841654286828 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764587905027 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147086474948 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824591657347 0.0645574589148 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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