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In the past shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby.
To what extend do you think this is a positive trend.
In the past, shopping was a routine house work. However, nobody could disagree that shopping has become a hobby to many people rather than a domestic chore. To my mind in the earlier stages of civilisation, shopping or rather trading was mostly for attaining food and clothes. But what are the reasons why people enjoy shopping?
This might be a cause of the opening of huge shopping centres, which not only sells food and clothes, but also offers lots of places to spend free-time and relax, for example, bowling alleys, restaurants, cafes, cinemas. Nevertheless, the habits of shopping have also ...
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