Some people like to do only what they do already do well. Other people prefer to try new things and take risks. Which do you prefer?
By and large, it is established beyond doubt that takes risks play a pivotal role in our personal life. Some people are inclined toward the opinion that they should do their works without taking a risk whereas others take a radically different viewpoint and alleged that risks could determine whether they are successful or not. Due to the controversial nature of this question, there is not a general argument on this issue. I am, however, to a great extent of the conviction that makes a sound decision and thinks wisely about works could guarantee our future life without making mistakes. The following paragraphs will aptly substantiate my viewpoint.
To commence with, many people believe that successful people have always done their works through a meticulous plan and not to do something wrong during their lives. This means that thinking about different situations could not lead us to idiot decisions. Generally phrased, life is full of trials and tribulations and any mature human beings could admit that success will be a blank dream without difficulties. To elucidate more on this issue, majorities of people take risks in order to become successful in their personal life and overcome obstacles as well. But no one could guarantee people' progress through risks owing to the fact that positive and negative consequences of any decision will not come to our mind in the spur of the moment. As a vivid example, according to a study conducted in our country, a plethora of people run into a huge problem when it comes to decision making through risk due to the fact that they do not think deeply and wisely about results.
Another reason that should not go unnoticed is that not only people can consult with others and socialize but also cannot do something wrong. To put it in other word, crowds of people are likely to do their work precisely and take every important issue into consideration. Consult with experienced experts will help them to keep pace vigorously and in some case enhance their social activities. Going into the depth, if people take another opinion into account, they will not be forced to act immediately and take risks. As far as I am concerned, risks could not be a permanent supporter for people in order to do their works rightly. On the other hand, take a risk will teach people how to be courageous and try various situations. In fact, important opportunities do not shine clearly but it is a human being that should seize those opportunities by taking majorities of risks in order to become a self-sufficient person.
In light of reasons elaborated, I reiterate that being successful is the utmost important life goal for every human being whether through wise decision or take risks. In fact, make a right decision and think about the various condition will guarantee people's progress. In addition, if people count on risks, they will certainly do something wrong, which might jeopardize their future life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 168, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...er through wise decision or take risks. In fact, make a right decision and think a...
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Line 7, column 270, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...dition will guarantee peoples progress. In addition, if people count on risks, the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, whereas, in addition, in fact, by and large, on the other hand, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2463.0 1977.66487455 125% => OK
No of words: 496.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96572580645 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71922212354 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65300442135 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491935483871 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 762.3 618.680645161 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9406065585 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.285714286 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.619047619 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47619047619 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273717481307 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919329631553 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819819701455 0.0737576698707 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186841733275 0.150856017488 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639302449166 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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