we are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in businesses, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes. what things will they be used for in the future? Is this dependence on computers a good thing or should we be more suspicious of their benefits?
Technology is dramatically developing, which is accompanied by numerous positive or negative results. Although computer has many excellent effects on human`s life, drawbacks should be mentioned, also. People are becoming addicted to this device and con not imagine life without it. The progressive role of computers will be analyzed on this essay, before a reasonable conclusion is drawn.
It is obvious that recent technology has encouraging effect on life. computers can prepare suitable opportunity to be updated and increase knowledge about what are happening over the world. For instance, individuals from a continent can be aware about a phenomena, which has happened in the another continent. Moreover, peoples affairs will be done easier by using such kind of media. The ability of computer about saving huge amount information, will decline people`s responsibility for remembering some data.
On the other hand, each addiction has adverse effects on life. Regarding to many entertainments, which have added to a computer, spending more time with this device can be wastage of time. It may be abused by users and they loss worthwhile time, which is irreversible. Furthermore, physical activities will be declined in a society, where every aspects of life are dependent on computers. for example, folk prefer to visit novel locations by computers instead of travelling.
All in all, usage of computers is significantly going up. Scientists believe that computers will have working as a person by future. It is predicted that world will be managed by robots, which are complicated form of computers. Personally I do not agree to over usage of this device and I think it should be limited.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 201, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...;s life, drawbacks should be mentioned, also. People are becoming addicted to this d...
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Line 2, column 69, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Computers
...hnology has encouraging effect on life. computers can prepare suitable opportunity to be ...
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Line 2, column 252, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a phenomenon' or simply 'phenomena'?
Suggestion: a phenomenon; phenomena
...als from a continent can be aware about a phenomena, which has happened in the another cont...
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Line 3, column 389, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...cts of life are dependent on computers. for example, folk prefer to visit novel loc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34944237918 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06267364786 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628252788104 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.1866381766 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.9444444444 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9444444444 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254277122652 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731627250042 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449351806882 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149026882538 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0145234889408 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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