Education is the heart of development and progress in this modern era. Some people opine that all students should receive higher education, while others tell that only intelligent students are eligible for professional education. In my perspective, all students have the right to get good education.
First and foremost, intelligent students are selected to the high position based on their knowledge level and IQ. So professional excellence is the outmost benefit from the uptake of intelligent students. Intelligent students exhibit good performance in exams and related matters. For instance, critical decision making and valuable thinking are made by intelligent students in their practical work and exam halls. Moreover, according to them students of rich family are not allowed for higher education if they are not intelligent eventhough inregards of good payment.
However, in my opinion all students have the right to get good education facilities. Neverthess all students who attain a job cannot perform well. Performance in a job sector is not based on intelligence. Most of the time it depends on the ability of a person. To take an example, recent research study conducted in an industrial field showed that good performance resulted from the students who are medial intelligent. Despite of their good marks,they were good in the practical field. Moreover few students are performing well in the higher education sector compared to lower or intermediate class level.
In addition, higher education for all avoid discrimination among the societies and motivate the students.
To recapitulate, it is obvious that development of a society is not only based on intelligent students, but also on all students. Each one has the specific contribution for the development of society regardless of all deficits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47872340426 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05434447468 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535460992908 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7655729383 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8333333333 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165207661813 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571118015488 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516031649197 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113452334069 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398243827498 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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