In many countries today insufficient respect is shown to older people.What do you think may be the reasons for this?
What problems might this cause in society?
Recently, there are a lot of countries older are being mistreated by mature and immature at the same time. As it should be there reasons when countries encounter like these situations.
There are severals points that this phenomenon has emerged. Firstly, patrents don't teach values to their children at the beginning of their life. However, values are the most important thing that it needs to be taught to immatures by parents, as showing disrespect to elder people has become so popular in the modern times compared to the ancient times. Secondly, elder people has been forced to leave their country to work abroad due to the unemployment in the origin country. But we find that they are being mistreated too in the other countries by citizens because they are out of the country, and they keep silent because they don't want to make struggle afraid from losing the job. Lastly, youngers like imitating other people and this one comes from watching YouTube channels, so mature counted it as fun habits, look what they do, when friends are walking in the street, suddenly, they see an old man walking in the path, and when they can be more than three friends, so one of the friend requests other friend to strat recording a video via a smart phone. Hence, they begin to joke and laugh at him and do some funny things with him, and after they finish, they upload the video on YouTube channel, so others start watching it from other countries or by the community itself, as a result, they share this video to others on facebook, or any other social media.
However, this would affect on others individuals, so they take an advantage, as it might encourage them for doing the same thing. So upon these reason comes all in one track, if parents don't teach their children to behave morally, this issue will be increased inevitably. So ethics are paramount in the society, families should take it into consideration to diminish from this passive behaviour. We believe that elder people suffer from these behaviours. We have to act seriously against this offensive attitude for return immature and mature into the correct path.
In brief, you don't need to behave in that way, because it is useless attitude, as it is insufficient way. Do you like someone to treat your parents the same?! The answer is no, I know!
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, lastly, look, second, secondly, so, in brief, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1919.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 401.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7855361596 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39391105344 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548628428928 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.4327773475 49.4020404114 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.9375 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0625 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172007162418 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617753259025 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375678903449 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115918714758 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309842656884 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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