My country, Portugal, is a highly touristic country in southern Europe, that is has been receiving a lot of tourists all year around, particular in Lisbon (capital) and Oporto. This two cities have been receiving awards for best touristic city of Europe and placing on the top positions of the all countries around the world for tourism. This is due especially for Portugal perfect weather, sunny days, gastronomy and history (where you can find a lot of historic monuments). If I had chance to guide a visitor for only one day I would take him to Lisbon, in the following paragraphs I will justify why I would choose this city and where I would take him.
First of all, Lisbon has got a high sea area and therefore it is perfect to go to the beach or be near it. In fact, more than 50 different beaches are presented only in Lisbon, where its type of sea water, wave activity and type of sand differ form one to another. But if one thinks that the portuguese terrain is just beaches and plain fields he is completely wrong! There are a large amount of mountains with endemic species. In Lisbon you have the Serra de Sintra, that is a famous set of high montains, that have endemic species as well as a beautiful palace, called Palácio da pena. The gastronomy, as like the rest of Portugal, is one one the best in the world, and its price is relatively low. Some of the dishes are pretty famous, like bacalhão à brás, sardinha assada and cozido à portuguesa. It also has a lot of touristic attractions, you can find the torre de belém, Mosteiro dos Jerónimos, Castelo de São Jorge, padrão dos descobrimentos within an area of 5 km. These monuments are related with Portugal time of discoveries, where back in the fifteen century, Portugal and Spain ruled half of the know world each. Finally, to mention the portuguese people welcoming attitude, where everybody is helpful and ready to share. Portugal still has in its older generations the habit of helping the "other" or the "next one" as many years of dictatorship and poor conditions for the common portuguese pearson have forced to. People were simple and without greed.
For all of these reasons I would guide my visitor to Lisbon where he could find good affordable gastronomy, historic monuments, temperate beaches, montains and the love of the welcoming portuguese people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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...onomy, as like the rest of Portugal, is one one the best in the world, and its price is...
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Suggestion: Some
...world, and its price is relatively low. Some of the dishes are pretty famous, like bacalhão...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, so, still, therefore, well, in fact, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1950.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 409.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76772616137 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68521109378 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562347188264 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 621.0 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.994623655914 302% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.9774650253 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.875 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5625 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113675690381 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0327053085429 0.076458572812 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397913864477 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0807014669338 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0149584428664 0.0645574589148 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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