One of your colleagues from another country comes to your office for an official meeting. Write a letter to him/her and say
– Describe how to get from the airport to his/her hotel.
– Describe the hotel he/she will be staying in.
– Describe the arrangement for the meeting.
Hi Pooja,
Hope you are doing great.
I am writing this to inform you regarding arrangements for your next week's meeting in our office.
We have booked one room for you in Nakshtra Hotel, Anand which is just 3 Kms away from Railway station. Once you will come out of station please take a cab or auto and reach to your hotel and tell your name there and they will provide you key of your room but just for your information your room number is 202. Hotel we have booked your room is 5 star hotel having very nice ambience and they are well know for their hospitality and food so I am sure you will enjoy your stay.
Once you reach the hotel, please be ready at 9 AM, I will reach there and joined you for breakfast and from there we both will go to office together for a meeting and then in the evening I will drop you at your room.
We have invited our stack holders, CEO, in this meeting as this is very important meeting for our organisation.
Please reach me with any query if you have once you read this letter.
Kind regards,
Divya
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| 2017-05-26 | jay.patel.4545 | 88 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 353, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'hotel' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'hotels'.
Suggestion: hotels
...otel we have booked your room is 5 star hotel having very nice ambience and they are ...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 403, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'known'.
Suggestion: known
...ng very nice ambience and they are well know for their hospitality and food so I am ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 858.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.29 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.04144556626 2.54303337028 80% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.6861223294 44.8134815571 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3333333333 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2222222222 16.8248392259 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194702494054 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822962939633 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716674649862 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0827469364561 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0817473504453 0.0580467560999 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.9 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.7 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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