These table and chart provide the information about the number of visitors to Ashdown museum and their opinion with their visit during the year before and the year after it was refurbished.
Overall, the number of visitors to the museum a year after it was refurbished increased by the percentage about 24% than it was a year before giving an impression of their satisfaction.
Turning to the details, from the chart the number of the very satisfied visitors a year after refurbishment was doubled and the percentage of the satisfied visitors increased by about 33% than their was before. However this high percentage, some people remain dissatisfied and also other were very dissatisfied. But their percentage was halved after the museum refurbishment. On the other hand, there were some visitors giving no response to this survey and their percentage was not changed before and after the museum refurbishment.
In conclusion, the survey results mean that the visitors opinion was positive to the museum refurbishment.
- Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages If these are not taught many are at risk of dying out In your opinion is it important for everyone to learn English Should we try to ensure the survival of local lang 56
- The graph shows the percentage of male and female academic staff members across the faculties of a major university in 2012 78
- The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country
- The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country 60
- The diagram below shows how geothemal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 95
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 212, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
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Line 7, column 49, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'visitors'' or 'visitor's'?
Suggestion: visitors'; visitor's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 865.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2743902439 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92211892308 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 75.0 106.607317073 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.457317073171 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9501557146 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.571428571 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.446031987691 0.215688989381 207% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.229658789388 0.103423049105 222% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137531036293 0.0843802449381 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.309621632531 0.15604864568 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11959009356 0.0819641961636 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.