Some people learn by doing things, other, people learn by reading about things, others learn by listening to people talk about things, which of these method of learning is best for you? Use specific examples to support your choice
Nowadays people learn things in different ways. It is very common for people to learn by reading about something because the Internet provides a huge range of materials on different topics that can teach human-beings to do whatever they need or want.But,as for me it is better to learn by doing things.And i can support my point of view by providing several reasons listed below.
Initially,i believe that practice makes perfect.From my point of view, a person can become a real master of something after the years of practice. For sure,theory can be extremely helpful,but with no practice a person can be all fingers and thumbs.For example, a small child learn hor to walk not by listening to mother's stories, but by trying to walk on their own.
And finally,I reckon that practice is even more interesting and can be easier to learn how to do something.The majority of people speculate that practice can truly make the process of learning more pleasurable and interesting.From my own experience, practice can make a person mose purposeful and this person wull try to get better of his o her competitor.So, practice somehow gives birth to leaders.And as for me, I have read multitude stories about dancing styles and hoe to dance each of them.But, after a while i started to dance on my own and i have been obsessed with that. It have been my calling and i succeed in that.
To wrap everything up,despite the fact that practice makes perfect ,i guess that both practice and theory are interdependent.So, to succeed something a person need to read about that and after that have to practice non stop.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, so, while, as for, for example, i guess, i reckon
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1012.0 1977.66487455 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 210.0 407.700716846 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81904761905 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 4.48103885553 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98536110921 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 212.727598566 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580952380952 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 618.680645161 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.1344086022 209% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 180.782078758 48.9658058833 369% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 202.4 100.406767564 202% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 42.0 20.6045352989 204% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.6 5.45110844103 231% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 23.0 5.5376344086 415% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110191229775 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048809011877 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497938522074 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0715290534628 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350016032992 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.3 11.7677419355 190% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.31 58.1214874552 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 10.1575268817 182% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 86.8835125448 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.0537634409 187% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.247311828 185% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.