This essay presents an opportunity to discuss whether the works of the most famous seventeenth-century Dutch painter – Rembrandt were actually painted by him. This essay comprises of various points agreed and disagreed upon. I will further elaborate on the points presented in the lecture and the passage.
The speaker agrees that the paintings were actually made by Rembrandt. The speaker furnishes several points to prove his theory which are as follows: Firstly , The speaker positions that the painting was analyzed by experts . On the basis of the pigment analysis , the experts believed that the fur collar was not a part of the original painting . It was drawn over the original painting probably 100 years later. Secondly, the speaker states that on investigating the painting it was discovered that the original painting had a simple collar instead of a fur collar. The simple collar reflects light illuminating the face of the woman which was genuine enough to believe.
Lastly, the speaker points out that the actual painting was made on a single piece of wood .It was discovered that the single piece of wood belonged to the same tree used by Rembrandt for one of his prior painting – his self portrait with a hat. Various wooden panels were glued on the sides of the painting probably to make it look more valuable and grand.
The author of the reading passage contradicts the views of the speaker in the lecture . The author statuses various points to highlight the inconsistency in the dressing of the woman in the portrait which are as follows : Firstly , the author describes the inconsistency in the subjects’ clothing. He mentions that a white linen cap is worn by the woman which was generally worn by servants . However , the coat worn by the lady has a luxurious fur collar that no servant could afford. The author points out that Rembrandt was known for his attention to the details of his subjects’ clothing, would not have made such an error. However , The speaker opposes the author by stating that the fur collar was drawn over the original painting. The original painting had a simple collar . Secondly , the author states that Rembrandt was considered to be a master of light and shadow . However , in the painting none of the two elements complement each other . The author describes the issue by stating that the dark fur collar doesn’t reflect light .Hence , the face of the woman appears partially in shadow. Nevertheless , the speaker contradicts the author by stating that the original painting had a simple collar . The simple collar reflect light due to which , the face was well illuminated . Lastly , the author states that the painting was made on different panels which , were glued together . However , the speaker states that the original painting was made on a single piece of wood .
The essay above clearly correlates the agreements and disagreements if the works of the most famous seventeenth-century Dutch painter – Rembrandt were actually painted by him.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, hence, however, if, lastly, look, nevertheless, second, secondly, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 10.4613686534 220% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 12.0772626932 182% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 22.412803532 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 30.3222958057 201% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2516.0 1373.03311258 183% => OK
No of words: 497.0 270.72406181 184% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06237424547 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72159896747 4.04702891845 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77261509936 2.5805825403 107% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 145.348785872 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.396378269618 0.540411800872 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 747.0 419.366225166 178% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 23.0 8.23620309051 279% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 13.0662251656 199% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2339168332 49.2860985944 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7692307692 110.228320801 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1153846154 21.698381199 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69230769231 7.06452816374 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 4.19205298013 739% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 4.33554083885 277% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.475011953825 0.272083759551 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14773521151 0.0996497079465 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852180889459 0.0662205650399 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276513733587 0.162205337803 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737865120635 0.0443174109184 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.3589403974 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.8541721854 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.2367328918 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.42419426049 88% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 63.6247240618 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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