This essay presents an opportunity to discuss ways by which the Chaco Canyon buildings were used for .This essay comprises of various points agreed and disagreed upon. I will further elaborate on the points presented in the lecture and the passage.
The speaker does not sound convinced and furnishes various reasons to support his theory. The reasons given by the speaker in the lecture can be traced in following fashion: First, the speaker states that from the outside the Chaco houses gave a sense of the Native American style of settlement. However, The interior of the house was the root reason that casts doubts because there were hardly any fireplaces .Fireplaces were necessary for residential processes. The largest room had ten fireplaces only. Lack of fireplaces in a house believed to be used for human settlement was unacceptable. Second, the speaker strongly believes that the houses were not used as storage houses . The speaker states that there was unsupported evidence . Furthermore , hardly any traces of maize containers were discovered . Moreover , no traces of maize grain were found on the floor . Third, the speaker discards the idea of the house being ceremonial centers - Pueblo Alto. The speaker states that the excavation findings not only comprises of ceremonial objects but a lot of other material like building material – sand , stone and construction tools . the speaker believes that the houses were used for garbage disposal. Furthermore , The speaker states that the broken pots could be trash too .
The views of the author of the passage differ in comparison to the views of the speaker .The author presents several points which contradict the speaker’s belief which are as follows : Firstly ,Chaco structures were purely residential each housing hundred’s of people each. These Chaco Canyon houses resembled to large apartment buildings at Taos, New Mexico. The speaker opposes the author by stating that the houses lacked the required amount of fireplaces to harbor hundreds of people . Hence the houses were not purely domestic . Secondly, The author believes that the houses served to be a maize store house . Furthermore , the houses had appropriate conditions to store food for long periods and provided with long –lasting food supply. However, the speaker contradicts the author by throwing a light on the excavation findings. The speaker states that no evidence was found to show that the house was used as a maize storehouse. Lastly , the author statuses that these structures were used as ceremonial centers – Pueblo Alto . Excavations revealed deposits that contained broken pots used in ceremonies . Yet , the speaker refutes by stating that excavations findings revealed that the house was probably used to store trash.
The essay above clearly correlates the agreements and disagreements the ways by which the Chaco Canyon buildings were used for.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 10.4613686534 220% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 12.0772626932 157% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 30.3222958057 158% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2446.0 1373.03311258 178% => OK
No of words: 459.0 270.72406181 170% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32897603486 5.08290768461 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.04702891845 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72023369864 2.5805825403 105% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 145.348785872 149% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.472766884532 0.540411800872 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 746.1 419.366225166 178% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 21.0 8.23620309051 255% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 13.0662251656 207% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.0182306819 49.2860985944 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5925925926 110.228320801 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 21.698381199 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 7.06452816374 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 4.19205298013 692% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 4.45695364238 224% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.27373068433 281% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298125716376 0.272083759551 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992538762011 0.0996497079465 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544208438727 0.0662205650399 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1823207823 0.162205337803 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632841483981 0.0443174109184 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.3589403974 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.2367328918 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 63.6247240618 171% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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