Some people think the air travel should be restricted because it causes environmental pollution. Do you agree or disagree? give your opinion and relevant examples.
With the advancement of technology and invention of airplanes, world seems to have contracted. People are able to travel long distances in a short span of time. Although, some opiniate that the use of air crafts have led to air contamination and travelling through air should get restricted, I personally disagree with this viewpoint.
Air travel has many benefits. Firstly, it reduces the time consumed in travelling. For example, time taken to fly from India to Singapore is just six hours, while it may take days through ship to reach there. Secondly, it is the most convenient way of commuting as a person do not have to worry about his luggage and he can enjoy the leisure time during the journey. Thirdly, air transport is the most reliable way to send gifts to relatives residing in different parts of the world.
In addition, airline companies provide employment to thousands of people around the world. Staff members such as pilots, air hostesses, ground staff, cleaning staff, etc. are able to earn wages to feed their families. If the airlines get restricted, many people will lose their jobs and will not be able to sustain their livelihood.
Moreover, the restriction on air travel will also affect the economy of a country. The world globalization is based on the trade among different nations which further depends on timely delivery of goods and products and air transport is the only means to assure the same. Thus, restriction on air transport means restriction on the growth of the economy.
To summarize, it is impossible to put restrictions on air travel as it has become a crucial part of not only an individual's life but also for the development of the nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 113, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...as become a crucial part of not only an individuals life but also for the development of th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, while, for example, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93706293706 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77064313775 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583916083916 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.7961002649 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.25 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180996020414 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584841976761 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055073543521 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980713252518 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414700476024 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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