From the broader perspective, in the current affairs we face in which truth become an integral part of every single relationship. It is not far-fetched to presume that honesty is represented a crucial indicator for friendship. A am in favor of the opinion that people take truth into consideration for their relationship. I feel this way for two main reasons which I will explore in the following paragraph.
To begin with, telling the truth create a situation in which people can rely on each other. Most people tend to be with those who are not tell lies in every condition even in heated circumstances. So they can trust and say about their privacy to each other. My own experiences demonstrates this concept. As a young woman who have limited close friends, once I realized one of my friends tricked me about different subject. Since I saw her's true color, I cut my friendship with her. Since she broke my entire trust.
Moreover, telling the truth allows us to be happy since there is no stress about what we have said. What I mean is that, being honest and telling truth have beneficial effect on our body since cutting the amount of anxious are very helpful for us.
Thirdly, truth provides a perfect opportunity which the circle of love will be enhanced. I mean, people develop their insight and empathy and also care about each other. Let me illustrates with one of my experiences, I have had a boyfriend for four years and each day passes, our friendship will more strong. Actually we create a great love by telling truth.
In conclusion, I hold the view that telling the truth is really essential in relationship which people have. Since as I mentioned above it improves reliability, increases happiness and fosters the love.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 228, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'An' instead of 'A' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: An
...ted a crucial indicator for friendship. A am in favor of the opinion that people ...
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Line 1, column 228, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ted a crucial indicator for friendship. A am in favor of the opinion that people tak...
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Line 2, column 139, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'told'.
Suggestion: told
...eople tend to be with those who are not tell lies in every condition even in heated ...
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Line 2, column 483, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ue color, I cut my friendship with her. Since she broke my entire trust. Moreover, t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, moreover, really, so, third, thirdly, i feel, i mean, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 301.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78405315615 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71166771518 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598006644518 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4727297369 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.7894736842 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8421052632 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36842105263 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156872393525 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513225321239 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602955334717 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0943586786534 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233400546233 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.