tpo 29 integrated
The lecture and the reading are both discuss the migration of the endamousour from the north to the south to escape from the harsh weather in the winter. The reading claims that the migration of the enanotosour is possible and provides three reasons to support the claim. However, the lecture refutes this claim, saying that none of the theories mentioned in the reading are convincing.
First of all, the reading claims that the endmontosaurs migrate to the south because there are a lot of foods. The endmontosours feed on plant and in the winter the south is the only place that had plenty of plants to feed the dinosaur. However, the lecture argues that the south was not only the place that had plants 100 year ago. Furthermore, the professor says 100 years ago the sun shine on the north 24 hour per day in the summer, consequently many plants were available. Also in the winter there were many notorious dead plants, in which the endmontosaur can feed on them.
In addition, the reading makes the argument that the Edmontosaurs were living in herds. Many skeletons have been unearthed from the same site. The lecture counters this point by stating that not all the animals that lived in herd are proposed to migration. According to the professor Roosevelt live in the forest as herd and they do not migrate.
Lastly, the reading passage argues that the Endmontasour were capable for migrating long distance. Edmontosaurs run five kilometers in 1 hour support the claim that they able to run fast to reach the south to escape f Edmontosaursrom the harsh winter. However, the lecture refutes this claim by pointing out that only the adult endmontasour are capable to run fast. The juveniles were too slow. Moreover, the juveniles will slow down the herd and the adults endamontasour can not leave the juveniles alone, so they have to stay with them in the north.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
- Young people have no influence on the important decision that determine the future of society as a whole. 63
- TPO-01 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.Use specific reaso 70
- Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past 70
- tpo integrated 28 63
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ed in the reading are convincing. First of all, the reading claims that th...
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...years ago the sun shine on the north 24 hour per day in the summer, consequently man...
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... the endmontosaur can feed on them. In addition, the reading makes the argum...
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... the reading makes the argument that the Edmontosaurs were living in herds. Man...
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...kes the argument that the Edmontosaurs were living in herds. Many skeletons hav...
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... as herd and they do not migrate. Lastly, the reading passage argues that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, furthermore, however, lastly, moreover, so, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 30.3222958057 135% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1373.03311258 114% => OK
No of words: 322.0 270.72406181 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84782608696 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58823125185 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 145.348785872 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484472049689 0.540411800872 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 467.1 419.366225166 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 13.0 8.23620309051 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.8355449229 49.2860985944 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8235294118 110.228320801 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9411764706 21.698381199 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64705882353 7.06452816374 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275164672908 0.272083759551 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882643122219 0.0996497079465 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499723267458 0.0662205650399 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166319778808 0.162205337803 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458035413509 0.0443174109184 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.3589403974 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.8541721854 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.2367328918 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.42419426049 89% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 63.6247240618 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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