'The older you get, the more difficult life becomes.' Discuss.
It is an undeniable fact that when people grows old, they have to face more struggles in life. It is due to the age factor that many problems of life like health related issue and dependency on others are witnessed by the individuals. This essay will discuss various issues that life brings with an old age.
There are many hardships that are faced by elderly people. Firstly, coping up with the health standards. The more aged the people get, the more sedentary life they are forced to live. This is because, older people are not able to do exercise and keep themselves healthy. It may be possible that they are not even able to walk which contributes to the rise in problems associated with human body. For example, a thirty minute walk is recommended to every person to be fit and prevent issues like heart attack and diabetes, while this is not possible when a person gets too old. Hence, this creates difficulties for them to live a healthy life.
Secondly, elderly people get dependent on others for their work. As they cannot go out or drive by themselves, they always want someone on whom they can trust for doing their work. For instance, if they require money for anything, it is not possible for them to stand in queues of ATM or bank, so they seek help from family members to fulfill their requirements. This, sometimes, may also make them feel being useless and therefore, can be a cause of depression in older people.
In conclusion, there are various factors that contribute towards making life hard and unhealthy for our older generations to survive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73090909091 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44585397211 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585454545455 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.025953845 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7333333333 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116451528514 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465249160984 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508583183937 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0800365429812 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325213597447 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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