The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
Elderly people in most households impart teachings that have run in the families or society for generations. More often these are tried and tested suggestions, and therefore useful to youngsters and adults alike. Hence, I disagree with the belief that these ideas are not preparing gen-next for modern life.
there are researches done in past and present both, that inter-generational groups more often benefit from each other. The senior citizens are often more disciplined versus gen-next in following routines or a regime. This is the first aspect today's youth gets to learn from elders in the house. further, they are more social and self-reliant, most of the time we will find them using home remedies (DIY techniques) for cure and indulging in precautionary measures, then to depend merely on formal first-aid or Doctors. Many of our grand parents come from farming background having significant knowledge of food, agriculture, harvesting and creation of a healthy eco-system that leads to healthier and sustainable lives. Cohabitating or socializing with senior citizens is therefore a learning and grounding experience that every youth must prepare for and embrace.
there are domains where senior citizens cannot add direct value such as latest trends in technical inventions and subjects that are in vogue, and can benefit youngsters from vocational perspective only. Talking of automation and innovations, these are very fast paced that even professionals in same industry or function struggle to catch pace with; therefore catching up with latest trends is a challenge and daunting task for every generation, not just seniors.
To sum up, the experienced group of people such as grand generations in a family give us a framework to live, they teach us how to learn, co-exist, socialize, survive and lead a wholesome life. They are foundation course or institution for every family and important in framing future of nature and world at large.
- The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live think and behave However some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life To what extent do you agree or disagree w 84
- Some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious pollution and uses up the world s fuel resources To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- he older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live think and behave ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view 84
- School children are using computers in school more than ever Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this and give your own opinion 95
- Many elderly people are no long er looked after by their families but are put in care home or nursing home What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...citizens cannot add direct value such as latest trends in technical inventions an...
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... catch pace with; therefore catching up with latest trends is a challenge and daunting task...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, so, then, therefore, such as, talking of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33548387097 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88928552824 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629032258065 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4970544344 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.230769231 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8461538462 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150079892663 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520376360693 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648369843295 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0985656943937 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696619256722 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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