The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
It is true that many older people believe in traditional values that often seem incompatible with nowadays. In the recently several decades the world had changed greatly and we should appropriate that.
In the most cases the young generation can’t use the old view, traditions and rules, moreover they need another attitude and behavior. To example, in the past people who graduated from reputable university or college, were finding their first job and had staying at the same work for years. After several years they could rise to the manager position. It was considered that frequent change of work is looks bad. In modern world, young people should change work place several times until their achieved higher position. Nowadays is considered that every new job get you a new experience and additional opportunities for self-development. Another example is attitude to women, family and marriage. The generation of our parents usually created family in early age and used to stay married even if a love and good relationship already have disappeared. Young couples prefer to make common household before marriage to test feeling and if it didn't work properly, they break up.
Despite of all mentioned above, the old generation has some values and traditional views, which always are applicable to right society. For instance, they attach great importance to manners and relationship to people around them. They believe we should offer help to our co-workers, neighbors and friends. Also, we should do all we are doing on the best way.
In conclusion, young generation should value some of the old views and traditions to have a better life in modern world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18450184502 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72017046363 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616236162362 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.299540162 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8125 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9375 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212835565342 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634002905646 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547361731329 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147982914578 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438266333937 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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