Some people believe that when busy parents do not have a lot of time to spend with their children, the best use of that time is to have fun playing games or sports. Others believe that it is best to use that time doing things together that are related to schoolwork. Which of the two approaches do you prefer?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
When it comes to the issue that the busy parents should spend part of their time with their children to help them in their school homework, some people may agree with this idea and give us sound reasons for their beliefs. On the other hand, some other people might disagree and have different opinion. Also, those opponents could provide us with strong purposes to support their thoughts. I believe that the parents should spend the time with their children helping them in their homework because of many reasons. This short essay will demonstrate some points regarding my point of view in the following paragraph:
First of all, in my opinion, it is widely understood that the time in which the parents spend it with their children to help them in their school homework is very important. Each parent looking to see their children success un their school. So, to confirm that they have to manage all their time and resources to help their children reach their goals. Additionally, when the parent spent enough time to help their children in their homework, the children will understand the importance of their succeed. Also, they become more confidence.
Another point why I advocate that the parents should help their children in their study is the rapid development of the technology. Today there are many resources available on the internet. So, the parents according to their own experience should help their children to find the best and the more reliable sources to use in their essay. However, if the children depend on themselves they may waste their time in useless ways.
Finally, it is a well-established fact that the time that parents spend with their children build the child character. When the parents spend their limited free time with their children to do their homework, the children will understand the importance of the school and learn how to reach their goals. However, spending the time to play games with children will make him unconcern to their future. Moreover, the parents’ advice to their children have great impact that make the children more dependent on themselves.
From what has been discussed above, we may draw a conclusion which says, people who hold opposite idea may have the right to believe in that but my opinion and other people opinions are overwhelming too much to be ignored.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, regarding, so, well, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1954.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 391.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99744245524 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45046690199 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.457800511509 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 563.4 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.994623655914 302% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.6900856432 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.555555556 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7222222222 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 5.45110844103 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380659593476 0.236089414692 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144592175965 0.076458572812 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777635433722 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225723877375 0.150856017488 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080611155573 0.0645574589148 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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