It is necessary for parents to attend parenting training to bring their children up.Do you agree or disagree?
With no second thought, the upbringing of children is a full-time job which requires skills and knowledge, especially in the modern age. The parenting courses are becoming a new trend in the society and I partly agree with the concept. Since there are many other methods to do the same task than spending on expensive courses.
The proponents of the idea believe that parenting classes can provide full knowledge of baby care, especially younger population fancy to pursue parenting classes. For instance, how to hold an infant, diet plan, baby massage are some of their keen areas of focus. Moreover, the courses are developed by experts with videos depicting child care. With modern technology, it has become too easy to learn and grasp the understanding about adolescents’ behavior. As a result, providing a great deal of guidance to parents.
On the contrary, people recommend following alternative strategies before signing up for such classes, since some of them is an expensive one. Firstly, learning begins from home and family itself. Parents can take help from grandparents and elders since they have already experienced in the same field. This will imbibe cultural and traditional values, helping him becoming a responsible citizen of the country. In addition, the internet has a variety of materials available for free of cost. One can join online forums to share his queries and learn from other’s stories. Few websites provide free consultation which is another way of getting acquainted about child care.
To conclude, the advantages of parenting courses should not be ignored which is useful in shaping child’s personality and physique. However, all the free training materials and taking the cue from family members outweigh the need of a course.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to become' or 'become'.
Suggestion: to become; become
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, moreover, second, so, for instance, in addition, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28169014085 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82328502031 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658450704225 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4048828592 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.2352941176 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7058823529 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160873409727 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412216493402 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434677575309 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0924475977938 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0185723844361 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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