Sports events get the nations together and help alleviate the violence in the world.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this viewpoint?
The history of human race is filled with violence – from the ancient tribal confrontation to the modern age wars. People have pondered for ages to solve this problem to bring world peace and harmony. And, many of them have agreed that organizing international sporting events releases tension between the nations and bring them together. This essay will evaluate and support the notion with some reasons and examples.
To begin with, sporting events such as the football world cup, Olympic shifts focus of the citizens to an environment free from geo-political turbulence. Though world sport events tend to run for two to three weeks, it shift focus to a tension free atmosphere. And, citizens from different nations forget everything when they gather in the stadiums or sports arenas to watch their teams play in global events. People not only forget differences, but also realize all people should equally respected. For example, during Olympic games, people gather from all over the world in the host country.
Moreover, emotions are released during the adrenaline filled event when one’s country compete. Players are seen accepting losses with true sportsmanship. As they are role models, it is inevitable that same spirit flows to other facets of life. In addition to, common affection for the sport itself makes forget their differences and grudges based on nationality. Some studies have also found out the decrease in violence in the months preceding international sporting occasions.
To sum up, based on above reasons it can be concluded that the world sporting event are the precursor to world peace which is backed by both studies and ideology of mankind.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, as to, for example, in addition, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24444444444 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57047710313 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618518518519 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2122859483 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214351659169 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651049203869 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370246398444 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126480281848 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282678835829 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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