The maps below show the village of Stokeford in1930 and 2010.
The provided maps illustrate changes in Stokeford village over a eighty-year period.
The village is located on the right side of the Stoke River, which is wide in the south and narrows toward the north; there is a main road which is parallel to the river and crosses it in the north. As can be seen, in 1930, the most area of the village constituted of farmlands along the river in the south and on the other side of the road near to the bridge. In the west-north side of the road, between the river and the road, there were a post office and a small and bigger shops. Also, there was a primary school which had a large garden with an impressive house in the middle in the south opposite to the post office and the shops. To the north side of the shops, there were a few houses on the either side of the road.
Eighty years later, nevertheless, there have been substantial changes in Stokeford village; almost all constructions have been imposed to transformation, except the post office, which remained where it stood in 1930. There have been significantly more houses along the main road, which also has transformed having several branches. Two more buildings have attached to the school becoming twice larger than the previous one. In contrast, the garden has contracted twice of its original size, and the large house has become a retirement house.
The given illustrations show that the village has become mostly living area than it used to be a farmland in the past.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 64, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...trate changes in Stokeford village over a eighty-year period. The village is lo...
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Line 2, column 45, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...village is located on the right side of the Stoke River, which is wide in the south and n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, nevertheless, so, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1217.0 965.302439024 126% => OK
No of words: 262.0 196.424390244 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64503816794 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49890425261 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 106.607317073 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496183206107 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 375.3 283.868780488 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1061233057 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.636363636 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8181818182 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0950706899479 0.215688989381 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.042432029184 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666239243643 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0978600304584 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0810840056797 0.0819641961636 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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