It is generally believed that the Internet is an excellent means of communication but some people suggest that it may not be the best place to find information.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
The advent of the Internet has brought myriad advantages such as facilitate the communication. Albeit, this brings us convenience means of interaction, many believe it is not sufficiently reliable for gathering information. This essay will analyse both views before the personal opinion revealed.
There is no doubt that the Internet is the cheapest and the most convenient way of communication. Considering video conference as an example. In addition, virtual space becomes prevalent among juvenile. It can be more tangible while many parents can talk to their children from hundred miles overseas. Consequently, the Internet makes communication easier by comparison with last century.
But, is the Internet reliable enough to gain information from? This is a debating issue these days as the Internet become prevalent and accessible. Although it is easy and fast to find many data, it is somewhat pitfall whether these data are accurate or not. This will be intricate in the issue which is being interested in public as the gossips about that issue are more. Thus, seeking the reliable data can be difficult.
To conclude, as mentioned above, the Internet brings many advantages for people, but it is vital to distinguish reliable sources among various tempting websites fo obtaining information.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, so, thus, while, in addition, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1101.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 203.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4236453202 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97114991311 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650246305419 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4898663317 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.6428571429 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171463213228 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529200759855 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0265636731892 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0942045657908 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341066886697 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.56 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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