Educational institutions have a responsibility to dissuade students from pursuing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed.
The statement clearly reveals that the educational institutions have the responsiblity
of guiding the students in the decision of the field.This is one of the most common
case experienced by every institution as well as the students.I totally agree with
the above statement since I strongly believe in it.
First of all, I wanted to start off with a note that not all educational
institutions take care of every individual in guiding themselves in selecting
the relevant course.It is their responsibility to dissuade the students because
once the students complete their course in the desired field ,most of them are not
likely to shine in the society due to the wrong decision made by the universities.
Though, the educational institutions have the cream courses which make the
students to reach the pinnacle of success, it depends on individual interest.
If a student who is not interested in a specific course ,he can't make
wonders happen even though the field is in the summit position.
To validate my stand in a more intense way, I personally have an experience to
share with. After completing my higher secondary,I was in a strong determination
to pursue medicine ,but it didn't happen.I was made to study in one of the top
Engineering Colleges. Though I got placed in a very good company ,I didn't not succeed
further because I was neither guided nor discouraged by the institutions.This was one
of my personal experience.
Therefore, I hereby conclude that educational institutions have the responsiblity
to dissuade the students from pursuing fields of study in which they are
unlikely to succeed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, therefore, well, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 12.4196629213 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 14.8657303371 13% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 2235.4752809 63% => OK
No of words: 265.0 442.535393258 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3358490566 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1228689423 2.79657885939 112% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 215.323595506 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558490566038 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 704.065955056 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 23.0359550562 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.0526385634 60.3974514979 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 176.75 118.986275619 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.125 23.4991977007 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 5.21951772744 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.97078651685 443% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 25.0 7.80617977528 320% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.413638131952 0.243740707755 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.18442458517 0.0831039109588 222% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.217009137566 0.0758088955206 286% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107795614729 0.150359130593 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139073711716 0.0667264976115 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.3 14.1392134831 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 48.8420337079 60% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 12.1743820225 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.1639044944 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 11.8971910112 252% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.2 11.2143820225 136% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.