tpo 42
The lecture and the reading both discuss the harm of glass on birds. The reading states that several solutions from business companies are available to prevent injures of birds, and enumerates three ways to solve the problem. The lecture refutes this point by saying that non of the solutions provided in the reading could prevent the birds from getting injured.
first of all ,The reading argues that if people could replace the regular glass with the one way glass that is transparent from one direction, which would prevent the birds from getting injured. however, The lecture opposes this point by saying that one way glass is not suitable. According to the professor one way glass will reflect like a mirror, birds from outside only will see the glass. Furthermore, birds do not understand the meaning of the reflection. For example when birds see the reflection of trees or the sky on the glass they assume it is real and they start to flow into them.
In addition, the reading states that painting colorful design with small opening to allow light pass through, is another solution to prevent birds from getting injured. But, the lecture argues that using a colorful glass is not a good solution. the professor explains that colorful glass with small opening is dangerous to the birds, as the birds will perceived that the opening are holes and the birds will fly through them. the other solution is to makes the holes too small but the room will be very dark from inside.
Lastly, the reading makes an argument that one way to guide birds away form the building is to use artificial magnetic field. However, the lecture refutes this point by stating that. Magnetic field guides the bird only when they are traveling long distance. according to the professor, magnetic field not used for short distance, birds only use their eye and the bighting of light when they are traveling short distances
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...iness companies are available to prevent injures of birds, and enumerates three w...
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...rates three ways to solve the problem. The lecture refutes this point by saying th...
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...nt the birds from getting injured. first of all ,The reading argues that if...
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...e birds from getting injured. first of all ,The reading argues that if peop...
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Suggestion: ,
... getting injured. first of all ,The reading argues that if people could ...
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Suggestion: However
...prevent the birds from getting injured. however, The lecture opposes this point by sayi...
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...r the sky on the glass they assume it is real and they start to flow into them. ...
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... real and they start to flow into them. In addition, the reading states that ...
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... colorful glass is not a good solution. the professor explains that colorful glass ...
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Suggestion: perceive
...ngerous to the birds, as the birds will perceived that the opening are holes and the bird...
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...es and the birds will fly through them. the other solution is to makes the holes to...
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... when they are traveling long distance. according to the professor, magnetic fie...
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... they are traveling long distance. according to the professor, magnetic field not us...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, lastly, so, for example, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 30.3222958057 135% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1373.03311258 117% => OK
No of words: 325.0 270.72406181 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92307692308 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26613661281 2.5805825403 88% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 145.348785872 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.464615384615 0.540411800872 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 463.5 419.366225166 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.715298738 49.2860985944 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 110.228320801 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3125 21.698381199 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06452816374 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 4.19205298013 310% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.500659433411 0.272083759551 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169676058203 0.0996497079465 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854679447052 0.0662205650399 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.292019820132 0.162205337803 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0999756489311 0.0443174109184 226% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.3589403974 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 53.8541721854 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.2367328918 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.42419426049 88% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 63.6247240618 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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