Each year, the crime rate increases. What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is hard to pinpoint main reasons of the rise of crime rate in society. However, a great number of sound scientific findings indicate that alcohol, drugs and social problems are precursors to the growth of crime activity worldwide. Nevertheless, to combat this issues governments should take measures namely, improve employment opportunities and develop education program.
To begin with, local authorities should establish deserving working conditions to encourage the general public. For example, the Emirates used to have the highest rate of crime activity and unemployment among Arabian countries in the year 1992. But after initiating a formation new working conditions, increasing of wages and establishment of severe laws the malfeasance rate experienced a sharp decline. Thus, it can be concluded from this example that creation of worth working conditions impact quite positively on society
Furthermore, qualified employment will ameliorate life standards and economy. Public schools in Brazil, for instance, introduced lessons of moral values, which motivated students to study hard and goal new achievements. Taken measures have led to nearly 76.000 fewer crimes across the country. Thus, promoting proper education is obviously a great strategy to combat issues related to the crime rate
Following this look at the causes and potential solutions to the challenges associated with the crime activity, it is felt that with a tremendous efforts humanity will be able to overcome this issue. It is hoped that solutions shared in this essay are adopted around the world
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, thus, for example, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.622406639 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88198096694 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647302904564 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.5347731119 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.181818182 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9090909091 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.18181818182 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197779833271 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680710313935 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570239379065 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109022961217 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218456662021 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.71 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.