Nowadays, we are living in a difficult world proved by a huge number of crimes and injustices. The causes of this are not simple to identify and depend on a variety of factors. However, a analysis on certain types of criminal activity can help to find the solutions. In my opinion, some crimes are a response to a social dramatic background and laws provided by the government may improve the situation. However, some brutal murders and abuses are not understandable by anyone who shows humanity and for this I am afraid that no improvement can be done.
As concerned to the causes, poverty is well known to be one of them. It is evident from newspapers that a large amount of thefts, assaults and in some cases murders are associated with the part of society which suffer the most dramatic economic condition. When people are without nothing and ignore the existence of good because they had never received care in their lives, they are much exposed to do whatever is needed to survive. Hence, I think that, if the government proposed laws provided to create less social differences and discrimination, a large benefit would be felt by all and probably certain crimes will decrease their rate. However, I know also that is not a simple task for the government but a great responsibility is of our politicians. They are the only ones who can do something.
I contrast, I believe that there are some bad actions that has no explanation. These are done by people who are intrinsically evil and no help for them is possible in some cases. People who have brutally murdered and not regret their behaviour are not possible to re-educate in prison, in this case there is no possibility to avoid this type of crime.
To conclude, in order to prevent the growth in number of criminals politicians have to take the responsibility, providing laws which care on some social issues responsible of some crimes. However, there are some unfortunate cases of pure evil in which nobody can do something and these are not avoidable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, well, i think, i am afraid, in my opinion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7994269341 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80233913977 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532951289398 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8937626419 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.6875 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8125 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117877042024 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0385435004359 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0280303402349 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0725032828904 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389205984719 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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