BAR CHART

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BAR CHART

The bar chart illustrates data on the proportion of 3 elements which contributed to the UK economy from 1900 to 2000.

In general, it is obvious that the percentage of agriculture and manufacturing steeply decreased, meanwhile the figures for business and financial increased which was the highest constituent contributed to the UK economy.

In 1990, the proportion of agriculture remained the highest, at around 50%. By contrast, the rate of business and financial was at the lowest point which approximately 3%. About 45% of UK economy was contributed by manufacturing.

Despite a small growth in 1950, the percentage of agriculture observed a dramatically decline, around 2% in 2000, making the element fall behind two others. At the same time, there was a considerable fall in the figures of manufacturing with approximately 15%. On the other hand, the proportion of business and financial soar up to about 35% in 2000, significantly surpassing the percentage of agriculture and manufacturing to be the highest element contributed to the UK economy.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 72, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('dramatically') instead an adjective, or a noun ('decline') instead of another adjective.
... the percentage of agriculture observed a dramatically decline, around 2% in 2000, making the element ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, in general, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 900.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38922155689 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.37889075312 2.65546596893 127% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51497005988 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 280.8 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4742197468 43.030603864 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.5 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0666370269919 0.215688989381 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.03629012467 0.103423049105 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0960146449244 0.0843802449381 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0725802493401 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125712679483 0.0819641961636 153% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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