Do you agree or disagree: “In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.”?
Some people believe that it is better to perform tasks with haste carelessly, whereas others believe that it is better to engage on tasks with caution and precision. The notion that it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes rather than to work slowly and double check everything is a fascinating one and one that I believe in. In the following paragraphs I will mention the importance of speed in doing things nowadays.
First and foremost, the mechanical life of nowadays demand haste in jobs as well as in every day errands, otherwise a lot of incomplete tasks will be piled on each other. Furthermore, only by showing haste in completing a variety of tasks in the competitive environment of careers can you climb the career ladder, and become a successful person. For instance, many gigantic IT companies require job applicants to participate in a coding race in which the person who writes a complete code in the shortest time is hired.
Moreover, another aspect of having haste is the excessive experience that you obtain from different activities. When you try to do many things in a short time, you can prepare yourself for a brighter future by gaining knowledge in a diversity of fields rather than a single one. Therefore, not only can you become a more useful person, but you can also decide which field fits you best. Take my father as an example. He was hired by a company, whereby he had a variety of responsibilites, which he had to complete. For this reason he gained a great deal of knowledge in various fields, and he could decide that which one he could persue conveiniently.
Admiteddly, not to mention the importance of enjoying our work would be an oversight. When you speed things up, and you start risking things, life becomes more enjoyable. I prefer working with a high speed, making mistakes, and experiencing hardships rather than having a dull and mundane life.
All in all, in today's world it is crucial to maintain a high speed and make mistakes in order to be able to succeed, and have an enjoyable life.
- TPO 23 88
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 132, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s believe that it is better to engage on tasks with caution and precision. The no...
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Line 3, column 85, Rule ID: ANINFOR_EVERY_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'in everyday'?
Suggestion: in everyday
...owadays demand haste in jobs as well as in every day errands, otherwise a lot of incomplete ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, whereas, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1712.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 358.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78212290503 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72391487453 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553072625698 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1362651851 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203211971063 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657590840047 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886397725697 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119075451239 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0791509865238 0.0645574589148 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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