Car - benefit outweigh drawback?
In today’s technology-driven world, a burgeoning number of people are concerned about the rapid growing in the amount of cars. In this regard, whether the advantages of cars outweigh those drawbacks is a controversial issue. While many people believe that this would be a detrimental effect, I, however, stand for the opposite idea.
It is irrefutable that, cars give people freedom in movement with a low cost of only about a dollar in Vietnam per liter, which could help a car travel for roundly 20 kilometers. Unlike public transportations that have fixed destinations, people could freely travel by cars. More to the point, these automobiles would also wipe out the time and distance barriers. To illustrate, people no longer have to stick with the constant time schedule of buses or planes, with their personal cars, people could voyage whenever and wherever they want. Cars have also become an article in dress that demonstrate people status and their taste in fashion.
Furthermore, the automobile industry is a vital part of the world economy. Firstly, this would increase more job opportunities because more workers will be involved in working in car companies or as drivers, reducing the unemployment rate. Secondly, the local state could increase their budget as cars owners have to pay for their taxes and insurance fees annually. Finally, if the car industry is developed, other industries would be developed as well, as a natural sequel, this is an enormous boost to the whole economy.
In conclusion, this essay believes that despite the benefits of cars, people should be careful while using it. By doing so, the disadvantages might be minimized.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 162, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., the disadvantages might be minimized.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17343173432 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85658910343 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616236162362 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4937409743 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.142857143 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17331712762 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548809553951 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842477244769 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0919526917694 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354051180457 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.