A builder worked in your house a few weeks ago. You did not like the result of his work. Write a letter to him and say.
- Describe the work you wanted him to do.
- What is your complaint about his job?
- What do you expect him to do about it?
Dear Sir,
I am a customer of your company and this is to bring to you notice that the renovation work which you have recently done at our apartment and the work are not up to the mark and we dissatisfied with your work done.
The Raj Apartment society in which we are living and built by you and you had taken responsibility for the supporting any renovation and maintenance. We had the problem of seepage from the gallery and kitchen roof area. Six days ago your company had completed the plastering the kitchen and gallery and you had committed that high-quality waterproofing material used and that will stop the seepage. But surprisingly, yesterday one corner of the kitchen has got the seepage and this is very unexpected work.
I would request you to send your person and get the work done in that corner to resolve the problem. We would expect that the porting is first clear off with the current plaster and re plastered mixed with more proportion of waterproofing.
Hope you would understand our problem, get the work done on the priority basis, and complete as soon as possible.
Regards,
Jaineel
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 5.05154639175 297% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 931.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79896907216 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70530177026 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567010309278 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 281.7 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.5132834898 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.375 76.5299724578 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 16.8248392259 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.75 4.34317383033 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208064770053 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828956545318 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717130663364 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139061081772 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525554553477 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 8.37731958763 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 70.7449484536 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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