Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Technology have changed people in many different fields. By this, technological innovations have definitely changed our eating style as well as living style. Of course,today food has become easy to prepare. Here is some reasons and examples.
In the first place, people are so busy with their work life, they don't have time to prepare food. They are totally dependent on precooked food. For instance, microwave have become so handy. It has preset options for cooking specific items, just touch the button and within few minutes food will be try to eat. But everyday microwave cooked food consumption is very dangerous to health. At the same time, people don't have time to get vegetables, prepare food and clean the kitchen.
In addition, traditional system of preparing food and also eating together in a family is vanishing. People are so busy these days they don't have time to have lunch or dinner together in a family. Each person in a family comes on different time and sometimes eat it in their room. I guess they hardly see each other in a day. But earlier people used to have dinner or lunch at a time and spend quality time with their family.
Furthermore, people are addicted to eat fast foods to save time and work more. This addition will cause to many health diseases, leads to obesity. These pre-prepared food lack in nutrition, protein, vitamins which are very essential to our body. As we know there are hundreds of ready to eat meals. But one should consider is it really save for us to consume such preservative contained food. In contrast, we even get healthy and easy to prepare food. But it really depends on individual taste.
Altogether, yes people are attracted to food which is easy to prepare. Fast life style have made to forget about traditional dinner concept. They are less worried about their health.
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Hi, Can you please suggest me
Hi,
Can you please suggest me how to organize my essay? And i feel i don't connect the sentences properly. My TOEFL exam is on 31st of this month. Please help me to write a good organized essay.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 23 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 25 15
No. of Words: 319 350
No. of Characters: 1472 1500
No. of Different Words: 174 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.226 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.614 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.387 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 98 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 63 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 41 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 27 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 12.76 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.641 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.52 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.286 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.484 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.079 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5