Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us all want to do the same and look the same. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that people today are becoming increasingly alike due to the influence of commercials. Personally, I disagree with this idea since there are also many advertisements that encourage us to be different form others.
On the one hand, I accept that advertising makes people less distinctive in some aspects. As most people today are preoccupied by heavy workloads and family commitments, they have to rely on commercials to make buying decisions. Because of this, many big multinational companies that can afford huge expenses on marketing are more likely to dominate the global market. For example, soft drink giant Coca-Cola’s advertisements have penetrated into every small town on this planet, and most people in most countries drink its products daily. From this point of view, people do become alike in terms of food, drink and dress.
On the other hand, I think many companies in these days promote their products and services by encouraging customers to be distinguished. The most famous example could be Steve Job’s Apple whose slogan is “thing different”. Apple’s devices, such as iPhone, iPad and MacBook, are aimed at a small group of people, the digital fans who are crease about new innovations and up-to-date technologies. The unique design and excellent quality can make these products quite different from most electronic devices on the market, and this is one of the reasons why Apple has become the most successful company in the world.
In conclusion, it seems to me that not all advertisements are encouraging us to become same individuals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 352, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...small group of people, the digital fans who are crease about new innovations and up-to-...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33725490196 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08874256649 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627450980392 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7305506746 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.416666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19200388445 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728591294064 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579615827365 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132251561211 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483377086906 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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